We had to write a poem for writing class at compass, and this is what I came up with. Sorry it's so darn long.. ;)
I listened to the young man talk to me, 
I nodded politely, but he didn’t seem to see 
He ignored all the subtle hints I gave 
I didn’t care who Jesus came to save. 
He said Christ died and rose again 
To save me from my wicked sin 
I told him I’d heard the story many times, 
And that I’m too good for his religious rhymes 
He gave me a look and I stormed away 
What a waste of time in my precious day 
I already had my life figured out. 
I controlled my fate, I had no doubts. 
I don’t need a savior I thought 
But with this statement I wrestled and fought 
I was lost in my thoughts and didn’t see 
When a big mac trucked rammed into me 
I tried to move, but it was to late 
So much for controlling my fate 
As I flew through the air, thoughts flew through my mind 
Have I been wrong this entire time? 
I landed on the ground, bloody and broken 
Tears streamed down my face and I wished I had spoken 
And asked the man more about this Jesus Christ 
He had said he could give me eternal life! 
But it was no use, I was already lost 
The way I had lived was making me pay the cost 
My life had been about me, no one else 
How could a God save such a wretched self? 
As the world started spinning and going black 
I heard a voice saying, “Christ loves you, that’s a fact” 
I used all of my effort to open my eyes and see 
It was the man who had earlier spoken to me 
He grasped my hand and said don’t you give in 
God wants you as his child, He saved you from your sin 
He died to pay the cost, you would have had to pay 
So give him your life, don’t let it waste away 
I felt a flood of relief wash over me 
A burden off my back, I was finally free 
I closed my eyes once more, and drawing my last breath I sighed 
Christ is my savior, and I am His child.
Wednesday, March 17, 2010
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wow! that was so great! you really captured how good God is.
ReplyDelete--zoe
ahaha nice poem becky. that must have taken you forever and a day :) good job. mine isn't nearly that good :)
ReplyDeletemartha
thanks Zoe! :D
ReplyDeleteM, I love urs. ;)